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Wow, that was really insightful! The ping-pong effect part was something I have never thought of, and it makes a lot of sense. You went very in depth in both books, and I liked how you used specific examples from TEWWG. (to Kylee)
Jarrad, That was Jocasta. Oedipus was not ever married to Laius. It was perfect though. You got her language, and her feelings. That is exactly something her character would say, but only to herself, and it is a journal so it is great! She would never confess that sort of thing out loud. That was very well written. (to Tania)
That was really good. You chose great examples to prove your point. It is a cool take on the actions that it applies even to action you don't see. How Oedipus clawing his eyes out is so much more meaningful than words even though the audience doesn't see it happen, that is an interesting idea. (to Shannon)
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